Hello, again, readers!
I've been lazy this past month. You see, July was a Camp NaNoWriMo month, which means that I was writing every day non-stop for thirty days. Which is awesome, except the month after, I am about as useful as a worm in a swimming pool.
So anyway, I've already started planning on my November NaNoWriMo novel, and I've made a list of ideas that I can use. I decided to start writing each (as in, the prologues), and choose from.
Oh, and I'll post each prologue to this blog.
I do, also, have many other things coming soon, hopefully within this week or the next, including another video (finally), another GRIM chapter (finally), and another top ten list (whatever).
So this week, the prologue is for a story called "Babel," which is a story set primarily in Center Grove, Indiana (although the prologue is in Washington, D.C.), and follows many characters as they respond differently to the U.S. plunging into total anarchy.
And it occurs in real time.
So, here it is:
B A B E L
Man is least himself when
he speaks in his own person. Give him a mask, and he will tell you the truth.
-Oscar Wilde
Prologue
The
Washington Monument
12:37 A.M.
The guard sat atop midnight as if he
ruled it.
The night was halfway over. His
travel mug sat between his icy fingers and did nothing to warm them; the coffee
had practically frozen over by now.
He needed a fire. But he didn’t want
to admit it.
The Washington Monument stood tall
and magnificent, like Mount Everest, casting not a shadow of darkness but a
shadow of time, continuing to remain vigilant as it had for nearly one hundred
and thirty years.
The guard’s name was James. He was
six feet precisely in height and boasted a thick, bristled handlebar mustache.
He wore simple black slacks and button-down shirt, with a bulletproof vest and
reflective covering to state his rank. Pushing back his hairline were a pair of
Aviators, which glinted the two red lights that blinked from the capstone of
the obelisk.
His horse, God only knows how many
years old, was called Blackwood.
James twiddled with the reins as he
dumped the last droplets of his coffee slowly into the pine needles. He was
positioned beneath a few trees just off the white pavement that encircled the
monument.
His watch blinked again, the numbers
a sickly green.
12:38 A.M.
The Lincoln Memorial stood more
beautifully due west, beyond the mirror-still Reflecting Pool. Its lights were
an off-copper hue. Over there, the tourists gathered. Over there, the guards
weren’t alone.
No one cares about the Washington
Monument at midnight. Abe is much more glorious.
James coughed thrice and wiped the
hairs of his moustache.
A little history for James: he moved
to D.C. in the summer of 2012, a little over eighteen months ago. He was not
married. He had no children. Only a girlfriend, long-distance, senior year of
college. They conversed via Internet video chat, thrice a week, at precisely
seven o’ clock P.M.
Her name was Cassie.
12:39 A.M.
The thin squeak of a rubber glove
hit the wind and it caught James’ attention as if someone had fired a gun
point-blank next to his ear.
He looked up and froze as stiff as
the water in the Reflecting Pool.
Perhaps at this moment he was only
being paranoid, but he rested his hand on his holster and felt the
groove-ridden grip on his USP .45. The black handgun was stained with sweat
stains from the firing range.
He did not call out, because that is
not the guard’s job. It was most likely only a tourist.
He sat for a moment and waited. His
shift was to end at two o’ clock, and he was just hoping, through some miracle,
that time had flown faster than usual.
It was then that the smoke began to
fill the space around him.
A thin metal canister soared from
within the overcast tree line and rolled along the sod and mulch, stopping at
Blackwood’s front left hoof. The steed did not notice.
James.
Was terrified.
The can began to belch smoke and he
knew exactly what it was. He tossed the mug aside and took to the reins,
kicking Blackwood in the ribs and and launching forward, towards the monument
base. The heavy hooves clacked along the granite circle as the two passed
through two of the fifty star-spangled banners that hung limp to the poles that
held them aloft.
12:40 A.M.
James and Blackwood were in the open
now, but the lights that swaddled them gave them better vision into the dark
grove of trees.
James panted.
The horse whinnied.
The guard, fingers beginning to
tremble, fumbled for the handgun and unbuckled it from the holster, thrusting
it forth and aiming it into the trees.
Had he accounted for the smoke, he
might have been able to see them.
He gulped and waited. The tendrils
and wisps spread to all corners of his peripheral gaze, like darkness when death
takes your hand and carries you upward.
“SHOW YOURSELF!”
12:41 A.M.
They moved like shadows through the
crest of pines.
No record holds their precise
numbers, but it was somewhere, roughly, between ten and fifteen.
One of them, their self-proclaimed
leader, was perched within one of the trees, the tallest in the grove, and he
used the lightning-green lenses of his night vision goggles to observe James,
trembling, atop Blackwood.
He did not speak. He merely mimicked
the call of a Northern Cardinal.
With the signal sounding through the
blackness, some ten men materialized from the earth, or so it seemed, and crept
towards the cloud of smoke with as much haste as would allow them without
snapping a twig.
In their hands were long, slender
black rifles.
And on their backs were simple packs
of similar colors.
12:42 A.M.
Blackwood reared his head and
whimpered.
“Shhh, hush, now is NOT the time,”
hissed James, taking turns with his palms to remove the sweat from their skin.
A little more history for James: he
had never shot a man, nor fought an enemy.
He did not hear it, but behind him,
another can unleashed a cloud into the air.
By this point, he knew that he was
in danger and that Northern Cardinals generally didn’t make it past the White
House without being shot by the roof snipers, so he yanked his phone from his
belt and began to dial the Pentagon.
Then came the fire.
Torches, all around the great
American obelisk, appeared and illuminated the masked faces of the hellions who
stalked James. Arms lobbed the torches into the night sky and each hit one of
the flags or the grass, erupting in more flames.
James dropped the phone with a
clatter when he watched the star spangled banner billow in a ball of hellfire
to the marble earth.
12:43 A.M.
He tried to pick it up, shaking off
the shock, but it sparked and fizzled to its death underneath the blazing flag.
He was alone until someone came to
his aid.
The fire burned brighter and began
to spread upwards, lapping up at Blackwood’s hooves and clasping onto James’
boot. He jammed his heels into the ribcage of the dark mare and flipped his
Aviators onto his face, dimming the blazing lights around him. The horse surged
forth and burst through the flames in a gallant leap.
They made it past.
James held his weapon outwards, not
daring to turn back and see the burning monument. It was time to become the
predator and hunt his prey.
“DROP YOUR WEAPONS AND STAND DOWN!”
he hollered through the roar of the blaze. He could not see any of them, no matter
how bright the area had become. He fired two shots into the air as a warning.
Because a handgun can take down
fifteen rifles.
12:44 A.M.
A shot rang out and blood spurted
from James’ calf. He wailed in pain and dropped his gun, which Blackwood kicked
away as he burst forwards again and sent the guard tumbling off the saddle.
James lay in the smoldering dirt and
clutched at his leg, cringing from heat and the silver shell that was stuck
within his muscle. He could see them now; they came from the trees and, like
shadows on the wind, slithered forward and ignored him.
They knew he was of no use to the
U.S. anymore.
These men were humans in
physicality, but not in their psychology. They were feral, they were brutal, and
they were animals.
They were still the predators.
The men passed him and closed in on
the great ball of fire that surrounded the monument spire, feeding the flames
with gasoline and more torches.
James stopped cringing when he heard
the hacking of a chopper.
12:45 A.M.
The black craft, sleek and strong,
hovered into the light, shooting down a spotlight that made the men scatter
like cockroaches. James waved his hand and tried to clamber into the spotlight
as it scurried from place to place.
Maybe, just maybe, the reflective
vest would save him.
The men around him headed for the
trees, but not before removing their packs. They hurled the black lumps into
the blaze and the bombs exploded, shattering the base of the monument and
raising it to the ground.
James could not move. He was losing
blood.
“HELP! OVER HERE!” he screamed to
the chopper, as the vehicle hovered just out of the explosion’s reach. The
bricks and chunks of stone that began to land around him were like a violent
hospice: he had mere minutes to live before he was crushed.
James watched as Blackwood rode,
screeching, into the trees, his tail aglow with red fire.
He cried as one of the men, wearing
an identical reflective vest, was lifted, mistakenly, into the chopper.
“NO!” he wailed as the wicked man
was helped into the copter.
An imposter.
12:46 A.M.
The helicopter exploded, the flames erupting
from the cockpit like blood from a gash.
The shards of glass flew down,
towards James, piercing his flesh and nearly slaughtering him.
He played dead, because he was going to be needed alive.
Beyond the Reflecting Pool, the people outside Lincoln Memorial were assaulted as well, in an explosion from within the steps that obliterated the pillars and collapsed the roof perfectly on top of
everyone inside.
Honest Abe, however, stood standing.
12:47 A.M.
The capital shook with cackling of
the flames.
Stay tuned!
c. Taylor Ward 2013. All rights reserved.
Maybe its just cause I'm a girl, but I did not enjoy reading this. I mean, don't get me wrong. You are a great writer and definitely have a distinct style, but much of your writing is very disturbing- kind of like Flannery O Connor, but I know she had a purpose in it. What's your purpose?
ReplyDeleteWell, keep in mind, this is merely the prologue of a MUCH longer novel. The full-blown story, I can tell you now, is more of a character study than a big patriotic action-thriller, while set in a sort of apocalyptic backdrop. This just sets into motion a much bigger plot. The full book is basically me wondering what the people I know would do if we were faced with circumstances like this. See what I'm saying?
ReplyDeleteAnd I can respect that you don't like it. It's not everyone's cup of tea, which is perfectly understandable.
You quoted Oscar Wilde!!!! I love it!!!! Seriously, though, this is very scary. I would like to see where this would go. And I like the technique of stating the time every couple of paragraphs. It's visually appealing and gives the reader a short break to process. You might want to change the phrase "stained with sweat stains" though. It's repetitive. Overall, great job! :)
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