Tuesday, July 16, 2013

GRIM Chapter 5



CHAPTER 5
A M Y

HAWKINGTON, LOUISIANA
SEPTEMBER 9, 1865
9:37 P.M.

            I still had my father’s rifle on my bedroom wall.
            He used it all throughout the war; even during Gettysburg. A gunsmith friend of his engraved his name in the wood, just a few weeks before he died. It still fired like a charm, and it was still loaded, with an unused Minie Ball in the chamber.
I wished he was still there, but not just because I missed him, but because I needed him.
            KNOCK. KNOCK. KNOCK. The front door shook with each pound.
            It’s almost ten o’ clock. Who could be knocking at this hour?
            I slid out of bed and flipped my long, ginger hair out of my eyes. SHE would not answer the door. She never did, because she was doing something far too terrible to talk about.
            “Can I help you?” I inquired, swinging the door open and breathing in a gust of cold night air. Before me stood two people my age, a male and a female. She was shorter than he, with darkly-tanned skin and thick makeup smeared on her face, most noticeably the eyeliner that coated the skin around her shadowy brown irises. Her lipstick looked like she stuck her mouth into a jar of blood and decided it matched. He, however, was more well-groomed, and more attractive, not to mention, with soft blond hair and vivid blue eyes, his face cleanly shaved.
            “Hello, Amy,” greeted the girl coldly, her wide, fang-like teeth spreading as she grinned. “Happy to see us?”
            “It’s bittersweet,” I muttered. I was a bit comforted by their presence, but they were wasting their time. They would have gotten out alive if they had turned back there and then. “You might want to leave. She’s touchy tonight.”
            “We didn’t come this far to take orders from you,” he groaned, shoving past me, almost knocking me to the floor. I steadied the ornate flower vase that I hit with my elbow. .
            “Where is she?” she hissed, almost snarled. They gazed around the dark foyer and up the long staircase. He pulled a long revolver from his belt and cocked it.
            My hands trembled as I stumbled back over to the door. And then I saw the army that they had brought with them: probably no less then a hundred people, all with various dangerous objects that any average witch-hunting mob might have. Torches, pitchforks, guns. The front men, the tallest and burliest, had wild razorback boars tied to thick chains at their disposal. The animals snorted and pawed at the dirt.
            Oddly enough, it did not frighten me. Because these mobs of witch hunters came every other week. Each time, they would venture through the woodlands of Louisiana, hunting, watching, waiting. Not for me, but for HER.
            Then again, maybe it was a good thing that my father was dead.
            We lived in the bayous of Louisiana just outside the town of Hawkington, perhaps the most superstitious place one could ever visit. But that night, they had reason to be there, because this was no superstition.
            “She must be upstairs,” murmured the man, named Ray. He was the town butcher, but that was not the only reason he liked to use knives.
            “You go first.” Her nickname was Whisper. She was Ray’s girlfriend and what I believe to be a madhouse escapee.
            Ray began to slowly creep up the stairs. Whisper unsheathed a slender dagger from within her torn blue frock. It was covered in blood, probably from when she cut herself in her sleep.
            I grabbed a candelabra from the sidebar next to the door and used the matches on the wooden surface to light the nine candles. The room was illuminated. I was fearful of what was going to happen next, and I needed something to see with and defend myself with. Because earlier, SHE was whispering things softly in her room, which you could hear around the house, but now she was silent.
            Whisper turned and saw the candelabra, rushing back down the steps and grabbing it from me. She pointed the dagger at my chest.
            “Not a sound,” she hissed, deranged. I nodded and gulped, closing my eyes so that I would not have to watch. At this point, I was trembling, despite the fact that this happened all the time. I hated it, I hated her, I hated them.
            Then the candles went out, all on their own. All that was left of the flames were wisps of smoke.
            “What was that?” whispered Ray, turning and coming slowly back down the steps. “Is she here?”
            I opened my eyes. They both turned to me and glared. “Where is she?” snapped Whisper. “Does she know we’re here?”
            I trembled and nod. “I am very, truly sorry for what is about to happen to you.”
            I dropped to the floor and covered my ears to avoid the screaming. I watched, curled up in a ball on the cracked wooden floorboards, as Whisper’s knife slowly began to fight against her control, on its own. She stared in surprise at it as it turned quickly towards her.
The last thing I saw was the glint of the moonlight on the blade before it killed Whisper. I could only pray that God would not let HER harm me.
            “COME OUT, YOU DEVIL!” shouted Ray, terrified and shaking. I could see his knees knocking together as he held his gun aloft nervously. He fired it into the ceiling once, making me jump. The moonlight illuminated the floor as a thin rope, most likely from within the cellar, came snaking along like a serpent past my feet. I trembled and did not move. SHE was going to kill him, too.
            A tear streamed down my cheek. Why did I have to endure this terror?
            Ray saw the rope and fired five shots, one after the other, at it, eventually losing all of his ammunition. I just looked up at him, my eyes full of tears, as he realized in shock what was about to happen.
            “I’m sorry,” I whispered, my lip shaking. The rope, like a living cobra, shot towards Ray and coiled quickly around his neck, constricting him and killing him. He dropped to the floor, dead, right next to what was left of Whisper.
            Then I saw her: she stood just in the shadows of the living room, next to the foyer, wearing a simple black nightgown as a contrast to my white one.
            “Hello, Amy,” she greeted devilishly, her voice like a hiss and her eyes like those of a reptile. “Sleep well?”
            “WHY DID YOU KILL THEM?” I screamed. I ran towards her and shoved her, sending her toppling backwards. I hated her. I hated her and was cursed to be her sister.
            My sister, the witch.
            “I had to,” she stated coldly, rising to her feet, unscathed. “It was his orders.”
            “Whose?”
            “My superior’s.”
            “What superior?”
            She did not answer. Instead, she strode past me and coiled her long fingers around the brass doorknob. Her nails were painted black and her hair was long and loose, the color of chocolate.
            “What are you going to do about the some hundred people outside?” I inquired, trying to keep from bawling with fear. She grinned.
            “I called for backup.”
            I rushed over to the door and she swung it open, revealing the mob, still in the exact same place that it was before. They glared with fiery anger at her and I.
            “Would you like to watch?” she asked. I shook my head.
            The mob saw my sister as she stepped out onto the porch and readied their weapons, the sounds of cocking guns and snorting boars echoing through the dark forest.
            “Hello, all,” she greeted eerily, projecting her voice to the back of the mob, “Welcome to the house. Cup of tea?”
            The last thing I saw was the sight of HER army making their presence known; the trees erupted in flames around the mob, and then an army of mounted men in white robes and hoods rode out of the trees, winning the battle for her. I slammed the door shut and sank to my knees, crying and listening to the screams.







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Friday, July 5, 2013

Top Ten LOST Characters

So, I just finished watching the science fiction/drama/fantasy show LOST, and my initial reaction was a mix between heart-pounding, head-aching, and mind-bending confusion and simple shock. But I soon overcame that and started rolling over a list in my head of my favorite characters and episodes. I'll likely do an episode list later, but here are my top ten best characters on the show.



#10. Mr. Eko (Adewale Akkinuoye-Agbaje)

Because this guy stared the Smoke Monster down and didn't even flinch. And his touching character arc made us all glad that at least HE was a good guy--unlike that Sayid punk. But his constant faith and his trust in God was so dang awesome that we wish he hadn't died, even though his death was pretty sweet.
Best Episode: The 23rd Psalm

#9. Daniel Faraday (Jeremy Davies)

If Daniel Faraday wasn't in this show, the whole time travel thing would have seemed a lot sillier. There was something about Jeremy Davies that made his character--and not to mention the entire show--feel believable. Plus, who doesn't love how he utters every word so smoothly like that? Too bad he had so few episodes.
Best Episode: The Variable

#8. Juliet Burke (Elizabeth Mitchell)

I personally liked Juliet a lot better when you had no idea what side she was on. One moment she's Ben's loyal lackey, the next she's feeding Jack top-secret information that reveals the ever-creepy Ben's weaknesses. She was a strong character that drove season 5 along and kept us on the edge of our seats during season 3. 
Best Episode: One of Us

#7. Richard Alpert (Nestor Carbonell)

Let's face it: he had the most interesting backstory--BY FAR--and had only one centric episode. From his touching love story to that moment when his first hair turned gray, he was just...cool. Probably because he seems so chill when really he is one of the more conflicted characters on the show. And because he's a bad guy, but not a bad guy, like Juliet.
Best Episode: Ab Aeterno

#6. Sayid Jarrah (Naveen Andrews)
Sayid had the most conflicted story on the show. No doubt. The end. But while his arc was tragic, it also showed off what the LOST storytellers are so good at; showing the good and evil within each character. He came to the Island knowing that he could never compensate for his terrible wrongdoings, but tried to anyway, ultimately resulting in his demise.
Best Episode: The Economist

#5. James "Sawyer" Ford (Josh Holloway)

I wasn't sure what to think of Sawyer at first. Was he gonna be some sort of annoying attempt by the writers at creating a funny swashbuckler, or was he gonna become a sort of charming Han Solo dude who was just trying to slip-and-slide right through life? He became the latter. He was funny, had a sort of humane view on the situation, unlike many characters on the show, and went from rogue to hero in season 5. Not to mention that fabulous Sawyer/Juliet thing at that point in time. Oo-la-la. 
Best Episode: LaFleur

#4. Sun Kwon (Yunjin Kim)

Honestly, she was the only likable female during the first two seasons. And seeing her struggle with her love for Jin made it no harder to love her and what the writers did with her. She went from little-Asian-obedient-housewife to super-Asian-boss-lady; with a kid! So, what's not to love? Her death almost made me cry, too, I'll admit that.
Best Episode: The Glass Ballerina

#3. Hugo "Hurley" Reyes (Jorge Garcia)

Who the heck doesn't LOVE Hurley? He was lovable, he was pretty much a normal human being, but he still had a troubled past, just like the other characters, and brought us an interesting backstory. Plus, he made a bunch of Star Wars references. C'mon; everybody loves Hugo. 
Best Episode: Numbers

#2. Ben Linus (Michael Emerson)

Every single moment he was on screen had me on the edge of my seat (or rather, beanbag chair). He proved that even little nerdy guys can be stinkin' terrifying, and after famously becoming an unexpected regular when Michael Emerson played him so well, he became not only one of the show's most iconic characters, but TV's, also. He was interesting. He was cool. He was dynamic. And most of all, he was SO. DANG. CREEPY.
Best Episode: The Man Behind the Curtain

#1. John Locke (Terry O' Quinn)

Duh. Just...duh. Not only did Terry O' Quinn bring the house (or in my case, beanbag chair) down with his quite broad range of acting, but so did the writers. And the thing that made him so unique was that he was several characters in one, because he reinvented himself so many times. Everything about him was what makes a phenomenal and brilliant character. In other words, he was so much more interesting than Jack.
Best Episode: Walkabout (Duh)


Honorable Mentions:

Rose Nadler: I think I gained a few years of my life with how happy I got whenever she was on screen. Oh, and she's that sort of toughie-with-a-fanny-pack character that shows everyone up even though they love her.
Frank Lapidus: He's seriously the only normal character on the show, which is what made him funny. He had the only legitimately humane reactions to the Island and all of its shenanigans.
Desmond Hume: He drove me crazy with how randomly he would have a really important episode and then just disappear just as randomly, but he did have some great mind-bending episodes, too. Just think about "The Constant" and all your questions will be answered. Not really, because LOST doesn't answer your questions. It hangs them over your head for a while and then pretends that they were never important.

Doesn't matter. It was still amazing.



GRIM chapter 5 up tomorrow! Stay tuned!




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Friday, June 7, 2013

GRIM Chapter 4



CHAPTER 4
B R O O K E

FELLSMERE, VIRGINIA
AUGUST 5, 2013
10:03 P.M.

            My flashlight battery was running out.
            I turned it on and off at different points, trying to keep it alive for as long as I could. There was no way I’d be able to get back home that night, and by the looks of it, no one was coming. I was gonna have to sleep in the woods, and after what I’d seen that night, that was going to be much harder then than it would’ve been three hours beforehand.
            Everything seemed so much creepier then. The wind, the trees, the crickets. Just half an hour previously I passed a tall, spindly tree that had its arms spread out wide like tentacles on an octopus. I swear, one of them moved a little.
            The car wreck site hadn’t changed. Still just a bunch of car in a lot of places. I decided that the most comfortable and the safest place to sleep would be in the backseat of the vehicle, since it was still mostly intact. Using my low-light flashlight, I tried to make my way to the car. But as soon as I did, I found something that wasn’t there before: a round hole in the backseat window, large, about the size of my head. Shards of glass sat on the black leather seat, and so did a heavy-looking rock. It made my heart leap to think who could have thrown that kind of object through a car window, even more so that someone had actually come near my car.
Cautious, I opened the backseat door, and the rest of the window shattered, a few shards of glass cutting my hands and making me cuss under my breath.
            On the rock was a message, sending what felt like a scream into the back of my throat. But I was too intrigued to actually make any noise.

UNDER THE WHEEL

            Under the wheel? What the heck did that mean? The engraving in the stone looked old; very old. And it was perfectly carved. Confused and beginning to get scared, I slammed the door shut and stepped back. Using the last juice of the flashlight’s battery, I gazed around the crash site. Sure enough, just a few meters away, there was the fourth wheel, the tire popped with a sharp white rock sticking into the rubber. I rushed over to it and lifted it up. And beneath the wheel was my phone, perfectly intact.
            All my fear went away. I could call my parents.
            I grabbed the phone, turning it on. Its battery was just barely still running. A miracle. But I was about to call Mom when I saw that I had a new text from an unidentified number. It was a photo.
One of the forest path.
My heart jumped when I saw it, and that time, I screamed, my shrill voice echoing throughout the woods.
            It was a skull. A horrible, white, misty human skull, its mouth open as if laughing at me. A chill ran down my spine and I fell to the ground, dropping the flashlight and letting it sit on the ground, pointing up the path. All the trees seemed to be leaning over me, as if alive. As if watching me.
            The photo came with a message, too. I scrolled down just enough to read it.

Don’t let the darkness hinder you.

-S.G.

           
           
           
           
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GRIM Chapter 3




CHAPTER 3
I S A A C

FELLSMERE, VIRGINIA
MAY 24, 1893
8:16 P.M.

            It always fascinated me just how fragile the forest is.
            Comprised of such wonders of creation, a system of never-ending life that all fits together in a multitude of pieces, each one playing a part in the continuation of the woods. The trees, the birds, the insects, the light, the dark. And how many mysteries they all hide.
            “So tell me what the wind told you today.”
            June settled beneath he bed sheets, pulling the thick wool covers up to her chin and peering out at me through the dim light. Her young, curious eyes were ones I wished I still had.
            “Well,” I began, my voice soft, just barely audible in the dark room. The only light came from a small candle, which had been burning for so long it was almost completely melted. “I heard very little from them today. But they told me one thing: that time has no meaning.”
            She looked intrigued. She was always fascinated with the stories of the winds and what they told me.
            “What do you mean?”
            “The winds told me that time is not in a regular order,” I told her, and she gazed on with wonder. “Instead time is a continuous course of events, all happening at the same time.”
            “I do not understand.”
            “I am afraid that I do not either,” I whispered. “But I shall sleep soundly tonight, and maybe it will come to me.”
            I leaned in and kiss her on the head, bidding her goodnight and excusing myself from the room.
            The truth is, the winds did not speak to me. But I do not know who did.
           
.     .     .

            As I lay in bed, my eyes on the wooden boards of the ceiling, I listened.
My window had no shutters, only a thin translucent curtain that waved slightly and reflected the moonlight onto the floor.
All was silent. Any sound would have disrupted my focus on listening.
            Every night, I hear voices. They come through my window, whispers as soft as the wind. I am not insane, for people would have discovered so by now. The only person I can tell of them to is little June, my sister, who believes anything I say. But the frightening part of things is that I have not a clue who whispers to me.
            I turned over, facing the direction away from the window and closing my eyes. It is always when I am not looking that the voices come. And sure enough, they did then.
            “Mr. Lawrence, do you remember?”
            A soft whisper, like the sound of wind moving through a hollow. Ever so eerie. Almost inhuman. I did not know of what it speaks. But I did not continue the conversation. I never do.
            “Mr. Lawrence, in not too long, you are going to meet a girl, one who thinks like you and acts like you but is not from your…area. When you do, remember her.”
            The voices do not usually tell me more than a few sentences. Unusual.
            “Some time tomorrow you must leave a note on the old forest road for someone, and you must write it on the stone. You are to engrave these following words: ‘Under the wheel.’ Make the stone visible. Good night, and do not let the darkness hinder you.”
            That is the voices’ usual closing. And with that, they were gone.
            The next day I was to leave a visible stone command on the old forest road. Why, I did not know. But it was new to receive directions from the voices. It was then that I knew I was not insane.








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